Open decisions — Landing v5

Q1 · Closing-section posture line

Pick the line that goes between "Run your league. On your terms." and the CTAs

Replaces the current "Twenty-four seasons told us what was missing. Pick it up before next draft." which you flagged as jacked up.

DON'S PICK

"You've spent enough offseasons patching the platform. This one was built to hold."

Names the patch-cycle pain, resolves with "built to hold." Two-beat rhythm mirrors the headline. No 24-year duplication with M8.

DAVE-GRADE QUIET

"Built for the league you're still running in twenty years."

Single line. Future-stakes frame. Tighter, quieter close.

SCARCITY URGENCY

"The Founding Cohort opens once. After that, the seat costs more and the input counts less."

Names the urgency lever directly. Strongest conversion pull but most "scarcity-marketing" register.

CALM

"The platform we always wanted. Built for the leagues that stayed."

Two beats, parallel structure. Honors longevity without naming "24 years."

IN-GROUP

"If you're the one who keeps the league alive every year, this is the one built for you."

Direct address to the commish-archetype. Identity-led.

POSTURE

"Your commish picks the platform. Your league lives in it."

Wait — this was C7 from the Forward-CTA copy. Don't double-use unless intentional.

OTHER

Use my notes below — write the line you want, or describe the direction.

Notes / your version (optional)

Q2 · The "other issue" you said I missed

What was the other issue?

My honest guesses: (a) Copy. Paste. Play. wasn't pulled forward (you said "future fixes" — pull it now?), (b) MESY easter egg in Bring bridge (you said "minute" — pull it now?), (c) the 3 MFL-abbreviation positions Don flagged (icon/placeholder/aria), or (d) something else entirely. Just type what it is — I'll fix.

Click your picks. Copy. Send back.

Pick the line that goes between "Run your league. On your terms." and the CTAs

What was the other issue?

Other things you've spotted that I haven't fixed